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The Girl





One day there was a girl and her grandma gave her a pouch. One day after school she went in her pouch. It was empty! She was so surprised that somebody either took the stuff or she lost it already! She was so upset and didn't know how to tell her grandma that something happened to the stuff in her pouch.but she had to be honest. So she called her grandma and told her.her grandma was very sad, but very happy for her honesty! So her and her grandma went and looked and try'ed to find it but couldn't.

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  1. Wonderful start, maybe try using a range of adjectives within your work. Also don't forget to read over your work and make sure punctuation is in the correct place.

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